Storyboard Draft Two Evaluation
After
the completion of my second storyboard, I sought a feedback session with my
media tutor. He offered me some valuable ideas and considerations and as a
result of our discussion, I can conclude that I need to implement the following
changes and additions.
1.
The very beginning of my storyboard, lacked identification of my protagonist’s
issue. Therefore, I shall reconstruct the beginning to include several
extremely close up shots, to depict Mark’s facial parts with makeup on and I
endeavour to include a couple of extreme close up shots of makeup items. These
shots would be entwined with each other to convey a sense of establishment, for
a viewing audience.
2.
I am going to consider where to place several opening titles. I am going to
challenge the normal conventions of just having them appear on a superimposed
blank screen or on action. I am contemplating to placing people’s names on
static props, but superimposing the references around them. For example, the
title ‘Starring’ would be superimposed on the action, but the actors names
would appear on relevant props that would later be associated with their
character and most importantly the theme.
3.
I now need to consider what kind of music I am going to use, primarily to evoke
emotion and to establish representation, especially for the very first sequence
of frames.
4.
A readjustment of scene one, shots 3-11 need to be considered, subsequently, I
need to condense this action, to allow for the additional extreme close up
shots at the very beginning of the introduction.
5.
At the point when Mark accidently comes across his pal Dylan, my tutor advised
me, not to take the obvious route, but to include something a little less flat,
maybe introduce the mates meeting on a staircase or an escalator.